Showing posts with label Critique. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Critique. Show all posts

Tuesday, 19 April 2016

Week 6

On Monday the tutors looked at my work and suggested Find another way to include the picnic basket in my spreads, as my attempt to include a picnic basket were clashing with the rest of the look of the spread. They also said that I should try include a third layer to further personalise each spread.
I Decided to include icons at the bottom of each spread that have a relationship with each site and spread topic.

Sunday, 27 March 2016

Week Four

This week on Monday we had interim presentation where we looked at everyone's work. It was nice to see how other people have reacted to the brief. We also got into pairs and gave feedback on our work and what we can do to improve it. 
What I got from this was that I needed to make it more obvious that my locations are for a picnic. Also to add more colour to one of my location spreads. I have continued to develop my location spreads and fine tune the look and feel of my brochure.

Sunday, 20 March 2016

Week Three

This week we began to brainstorm how we want to layout the spreads for and did this by using the thumbnail handouts provided by the tutors. We were tasked with showing on these thumbnails what we would do with the text using the columns on the thumbnails and how they work with the imagery we intended to use for our spread. Jason gave me a starting point of how I could layout my text and imagery and I continued on from there. I am still looking at design artist models. 
I am working towards creating 2 destination spreads and the topic overview for the interim presentation, following the artist model styles I have been looking at. 
I am interested in including illustrations in my design. Not so much hand drawn illustration but tracing over images on a computer.